Script

So the script,

heres more or less what we said earlier....but i was also thinking, what if we use Laurens real name. So people identify with her, so they are expecting some weird character reaction to being woken up? So they know its just Lauren. Then maybe we just say her name is protected for security reasons in the police tape. Also I wanted to say after my think on the loo that the idea kind of reminds me of the strange uncomfortable-ness of Clockwork Orange. They do Singing in the Rain and beat that guy up and rape the woman. Still singing. 

Anyway, earlier...

Wake Sally up.

Get Sally Out of bed and in to the chair for breakfast.

Feed Sally

Get Sally Dressed for school.


Thats what we got basically. But the question Andrew asked earlier about us not addressing this as a Dream like moment...being the only problem. It has stuck with me...

For this we can say we were just testing an element of the piece and are working on it?


 but for development so it is fresh for them when they see it.........
 maybe this could be in a weird way the way we show them our way of thinking. i'm not sure how we would achieve it. But keep it in mind, so this lens we use to show them the same scene with is kind of the analytical way we want them to look at the rest of the piece, say if it was at the beginning?

Does that make sense? I will explain tomorrow any way.

So any script furthering ideas..?